by JeanPanty
A good if unsurprising but believable story. A little rereading/proofreading would have picked up the handful of obvious errors/typos and improved it. Don’t depend on spellcheck alone.
Where’s the ending? You HAVE to have a complete ending in this genre - LOL! 4.4*
I know of several "friendships" that rapidly grew into more when one person became ill. This story accelerates the time scale more than those relationships, but the shift is really believable.
With what we've all learned about disease in the past few years, I'd suggest a "warning" at the beginning of the story -- firmly placing the events into "pre-pandemic" times. And maybe even urging a bit of caution in wearing masks and washing frequently before trying this sort of thing in real life.