All Comments on 'Flu'

by JeanPanty

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 2 months ago

A friend in need is a friend indeed!

5

reader1000reader1000about 2 months ago

A good if unsurprising but believable story. A little rereading/proofreading would have picked up the handful of obvious errors/typos and improved it. Don’t depend on spellcheck alone.

WantingToWriteGoodWantingToWriteGoodabout 2 months ago

Very good story. Will there be a follow up?

lAnatomistelAnatomisteabout 2 months ago

Lovely story - even if Mikey recovered a bit _too_ quickly.

5-stars

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcabout 2 months ago

Where’s the ending? You HAVE to have a complete ending in this genre - LOL! 4.4*

DrizdartDrizdart22 days ago

I know of several "friendships" that rapidly grew into more when one person became ill. This story accelerates the time scale more than those relationships, but the shift is really believable.

With what we've all learned about disease in the past few years, I'd suggest a "warning" at the beginning of the story -- firmly placing the events into "pre-pandemic" times. And maybe even urging a bit of caution in wearing masks and washing frequently before trying this sort of thing in real life.

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