by Evil Alpaca
Loved the twist at the start, and I love how you maintain a healthy ratio of sex to story. Bring on chapter 05!
S.N.
WHEN YOU SHOULD BE WRITING THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! Hurry, please. I'm so into the story I actually just skim the sex parts!
what a cliff hanger to end this installement.
gota go read the next one, but not before i stop and say how much I enjoyed the current part.
And Danm you for the cliff-hanger!!! I'm so frikin happy i wasn't reading this story as it was being submitted! xD
Still epic.
great chars naturally fitting into a multi level plot. feels so alive, beauty. thanks :)
Speechless ....... Ok i have to leave a comment for another minimum 10 star tale ...... Speechless ...... What a turn of events 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝