All Comments on 'Flying Lessons'

Not one of your best. And is it Deke or Zeke? You use both, but is it the same person or not?

LoL!

Too short, but I got a chuckle outta it.

"Everyone has a plan until they get punched in the mouth" Tyson

That's basically what this story is. Entitled and spoiled people getting a taste of reality. Just a small taste.

How long did it take to copy this from the cocktail napkin to the Literotica portal? I think you understood this, but no one else did/does. Pretty awful.

Have been a fun story to finish.

A long way short of your best work. But I suppose we are all allowed a brain fade every now and then.

Where is the rest of the story?

Great if short. I hope that you are back, have missed your story telling. The quality is not there anymore.

He shoots... he scores !

A great, quick tale of revenge, with just a touch of snark included in his police report.

Well played !

For a writer...

...who usually writes about fat pussies, and recently is a long winded plagiarist, this was refreshingly short, sweet, and oh so CNTRL ALT DLT.

A departure from your usual style, but a fun refreshing change. Please don't make these your new favorite form, though. I really appreciate your other work.

So he’s a violent man who will hit women who can’t defend themselves…and this is your hero?

Is this the kind of person you are?

No wonder you still live in your moms basement, playing video games and watching porn.

Pointless misogyny....unless the misogyny IS the point.

Why waste your and my time?

Where does an alien go to register? This one was too abbreviated for me. I had no idea what the backsdtory was.

YO Q

Of brevity and levity

Can one laugh at too little wrong?

For levity is fun enough

If brevity’s too long.

This Litty snack is not near enough

Even my memory is not that Rocky

Yet I enjoyed it so, and thus and such I’ll just say so

HOW ‘BOUT WRITIN’ A WHOLE BUNCH MORE

— you can do that —

A person who deliberately does things that could break up a marriage deserve whatever punishment is dealt to them. Take no prisoner.

Is most of the story missing?

This was a great story with a fantastic ending. The hubris of this, this female to think she can dissuade this man from his course of action by throwing a little sex at him. I especially thought thr flying lesson timely. 😜

It was okay. Would have been better and more consistent with the title if he had thrown her off a balcony.

Nice to see Femdom agitprop getting its comeuppance.

Nice to see Femdom agitprop getting its comeuppance.

Perfect! Thanks for writing!

Wow didn’t expect that story that way but thank you for the smile and laugh! A little more would be nice but not necessary since definitely completed the reason for the title!

Please do keep writing and I will keep reading.

LOL, great description of her.

An excellent short story but could have been just a little longer. However, that is only my opinion.

Very short, very descriptive and very competent.

I didn’t like it at all.

Bill S.

Now that guy's got his shit together. A flight instructor!

Fun!

Bill S.

What the heck was that, god some people should not try to write a fable.

Taking care of business with prejudice. Loved it

6 stars

This was not qmhl1 writing. He is way better than this shit.

Enjoyed this quick chuckle story. Flying lessons indeed!

This was a real piece of crap. I’m insulted

Thanks for the smile you put on my face! Recon I could be a Instructor Pilot ?

Where's the rest of it?

I don't care what Oldfart said, I thought it was hilarious! 5 stars

A little surreal. Not really much there to form an opinion on.

Highly amusing and at the same time tragic. Another succinct and to the point example of why communication in a relationship is key. Jamie should have talked to her husband and didn't and will now pay the price for being stupid. Jewel and Zeke will hopefully end up paying theirs as the low life predators they are, one can but hope. Well written its hard to convey a whole picture in a few words but this story did that in spades. Well done and thank-you BardnotBard

👍👍

I think he was a little upset.

Haha short and sweet!

Love it!!!

Jesus another unfinished symphony! Did you run out of ink?

Not too bright, trying to entice an angry husband that doesn't want any part of what you got. Not the greatest story but at least Jewel learned how to fly, lol.

I agree with Oldfart. A piece of crap. Two stars for a writer I have come to appreciate, most of the time.

JPB

Huh?

Short sharp and almost to the point. I get this one its all there, it would have been nice to know more but hat is really not required. His wife got mixed up with some swingers or similar and he was not on board with it. After he went ape and he had ditched his wife and aired what had occurred, they could not leave him alone. As they say nuff said.

Read again. I'd like to read the rest of it.

sorry you have submitted better stories than this , a lot missing from the story

Great!

Bill S.

Apparently a fair number "short bus" riders leaving comments as they have no concept of humor.

3 stars for the bit of humor

So much fun...favorite.

Fun but short. The cost of ink is on the rise??

Made me smile

Good stuff *5.

A quick enjoyable 5 star romp