by old_n_dirrty
He should find some other hobby, like cleanlng toilets!
"1*" !!
The drawback to this story is most obviously errors in grammar. On the other hand, it is a well-conceived story, with a good plot, a good introduction, and interesting characters. The story line moves at a steady, entertaining pace, and the interplay between the various characters make for an intriguing drama. With some editing, this story could be even better.
This outstanding story is surely one of the author's best, riveting from start to finish. With great characters and storyline, Flying the Friendly Skies is also very well-written. Five stars.