by amethyst wind
There: that place
Their: belongs to them
They're: contraction for they are
to: in that direction; toward
too: more, an excess e.g., too much; also, e.g., i did that too
its: belongs to it
it's: contraction for it is
I know I'm being picky but check your grammar ...differences between there, they're & their, commas & such. Great story but for grammar police those things can be distracting.