All Comments on 'Flying The Friendly Skies'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
grammar recommendations

There: that place

Their: belongs to them

They're: contraction for they are

to: in that direction; toward

too: more, an excess e.g., too much; also, e.g., i did that too

its: belongs to it

it's: contraction for it is

raunchyResaraunchyResaalmost 9 years ago

I know I'm being picky but check your grammar ...differences between there, they're & their, commas & such. Great story but for grammar police those things can be distracting.

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