All Comments on 'Fond Farewell'

by Frederick Carol

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kiwiplumkiwiplumover 13 years ago
sweet!

Well written lovely story thanks

IMcRoutIMcRoutover 13 years ago
Beautiful story

Thank you and good luck!

movermoverover 13 years ago
Lovely Story

Truly a sweet story, very enjoyable. Maybe a follow up with her sister?

ChucksSiteChucksSiteover 12 years ago
Nice! Well, I guess my vote is too late for the contest...

but I liked it and gave it a five. Not as erotic as others you have written, but...nice! It was a good last one on Frederick's page for me. I've read them all and enjoyed them, so now I'll take my leave and move to the alter ego page of Alex de Kok where I hope to meet some of the characters I've learned to like on these pages. Thanks for the good read. Hope to find more here at a later date.

oldwayneoldwaynealmost 12 years ago
A first class coming of age tale.

I thought it was a really good story and well worth the Five Stars it got from me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Very well written, but a bit hooky in spots

Attempts at old western speech are a bit off, but still a fun read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
NICE STORY

Enjoyable reading and the words made the story sound like a real experience.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow

I just found this profile from the Alex de Kok's bio page.

This story was just as awesome as the others.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Mostly well written, but no one in the old West would have used terns like “sexual encounter.”

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