by BlewWater69
Very well written! Waiting for the threesome with Janet in the next Chapter. :-)
I am w8ing 4 her 2 teach him about the pleasure of pain, too! 3sums would B fun also: 2 girl & 1 guy type, not the bad kind! Does Ann own handcuffs, I find my-
self wondering.
I didn't think this series could get any hotter but it is definitely heating up. Very believable dialog and trific graphic description. Can it get even hotter?
Again it is RED HOT SEX! Ann's a dedicated teacher of her virginal cousin, and he studies well, ever tender and thoughtful as to the lady's needs. With one of my female cousins we might have gotten it on if, when the chance came, I hadn't had the runs. With another cousin I had a lovely date in a borrowed Cadillac; but she stayed a devout Lesbian. This is a nicely planned and well written chapter in the saga. And I LOVE IT!
This is a clunky, poorly written story. The dialog is stilted and unimaginative. The promised Janet never appears. He comes four times hard in the space of an afternoon? Yeah, maybe,
Here's my favorite line:
"He watched memorized as a small trimmed tuft of dark hair..."
Betsy
hi packer,
i loved your story so far,it sure brought back some great memories of my twin cousins,alice and sarah. their mom and dad would only let them go to dances if i took them in my car, they thought it was safer. what great times we ALL had!!!