All Comments on 'Fooling with His Best Friend's Mom'

Really well done! Loved the surprise twist, too. Good luck in the contest.

Wow definately needs a follow on

Hell of a plot twist there at the end! Well done!

Good premise.

Sex was good. But too rushed. Needed some extended foreplay before his mouth was on her pussy. Needed some substantial playing with her breasts. Needed her playing with his cock for a long time. Teasing it. With dialog about how good it would feel in her mouth. In her pussy. Between her breasts.

Four stars.

god, that ending.. how demeaning, she was just a bet...

Well written.Good plot. Super characters. excellent dialogue boh internal ad external. Long build-up.. Extraordinary sex scene. Nice plot twist. Waiting for the pregnancy.

Well Done...5 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟..Possible epilogue?

Five stars! Great story line and it appeared to have a few hints for future chapters - another hookup; a couple of threesomes; pregnancy; etc. More please and thank you!

Malcolm is a grade A first class asshole.

i love this lol, great twist at the end! make a sequel or a series if you feel like, hot moms are the best genre!

5 star definitely. These characters need more chapters. Maybe not divorce but definitely future dynamics to see unfold.

Hey folks! Thanks for the positive feedback. I do plan on a sequel to this story hopefully as soon as I've finished up a new series on Amazon. Gotta try and pay the bills. Thanks for reading here or there, and see ya soon!

Super hot, but I actually *didn't* like the twist at the end. It made it feel less about Malcolm really caring for and wanting her, and more about a bet and manipulation.

Truly looking forward to reading the next chapter in this April Fool's Bravado excercise.

Ending for this chapter was well written, leading our imagination to multiple sexual scenarios.

Repeating looking forward to the next chapter.

Excellent. Beautifully written and highly erotic. The end was a bit fuzzy with the suggestion of sharing. I would have loved to hear their interaction with the son and husband whilst she and Malcom were carrying on and one of his dare being to let him make her pregnant and find out how the son and husband reacts to a newborn coming into the family. Looking forward to the continuation.

Would love to know who wins the next bet!

NO!!! This story is freakin' hot!!! I wish I stopped reading just before Malcolm and Loren spoke on the phone after Malcolm left the house. I could see if this were going to be a long series or something along those lines, but even still -- to me, it cheapens what Malcolm calls his love for Jasmine. Oh well. I still think it was a great read. So hot those two...

Other then the ending - was a fucking great story - why would you ruin it

When's the next part coming??

Heya! The story continues in Heat Crazy, which is already out! Enjoy.

Great story, but I'm with WildErotica69. The ending ruined it.

What WildErotica69 said.

Misclassified… not Mature, more Loving Wives. Jasmine is a low quality, cheating whore, not a prize. Malcolm revealed that there was no love involved in his winning the bet. You’re usually better at character development. Loren set his dad up as a cuck… bitch move. 1 *

An interesting play on the 'april fools' theme.

Looking forward to future rounds with Jasmine and Malcolm. One in particular Jasmine driving to see Malcolm while attending University.

One only the very best Mom and Son friend stories I've read in quite some time

Incredible, well paced and had my temperatures rising!

Well done.

Dude, my memory isn’t the best these days but I’d be hard pressed to find a better MILF story than this. Cheers young man on writing a gem and one that will probably all the next ones seem subpar. Thank you for sharing.

Out freaking awesome. Oh, the friends' mothers I have known.

I found out that my friend Peter was having sex with my parents after I saw him leaving our house on my way home from work,Peter and I were 25 at the time and I was still living at home with mum and dad, I became suspicious of his behaviour and when he said he couldn't make it to watch the football with me one Saturday afternoon it sent off signals in my head, I told him that I was going to the football anyway but I wasn't,my parents said goodbye to me and off I went, I hid around the corner of the street and 30 minutes later Peter's car turned in to the street and he pulled up outside my house, what was he doing there I thought to myself? I had a key to the back door and waited 10 minutes before I opened it, nobody was downstairs but as I walked through the kitchen I heard noises from upstairs, I just hoped they weren't what they sounded like! I was wrong, half way up the stairs I could see Peter fucking my mother

Totally agree with Bronze20. The best Milf story that I have read in Lit. Of all the stories I 'd never had an inclination to Jack off. But, man, this story of yours had me jacking off twice. Great stuff. More such stuff please.

If you liked this story, I recommend trying my novella The MILF Next Door (under this name, Ian Snow) on Amazon. It's a sweeter, plot-rich story if that's your bag. But if you like them darker and filthier, look up my stories His MILF Toys and His MILF Kingdom (on Kindle and Kindle Unlimited as Grayson Banks, who you can also find here on Literotica as Grayson_Banks). Those last two are hot as balls, with an emphasis on cheating and breeding kink.