All Comments on 'Foot Slave'

He seems to have found a nice Mistress. I love the way She has him service Her bare feet, specially Her soles. The glass table and Her little walk around the room are cunning brainwaves. I found your style expressive, but it could be a little less descriptive and straightforward. Situations and spoken words may sometimes be more striking if they just give hints and leave room for the implications. Anyway there's always room for improvement and that means other exciting stories!

It was definitely a nice read, however learn to use question marks. If she's teasing the slave with questions then a questionmark and an exclamation mark would work. ''You'd like ... wouldn't you?!''

very nice story!

Ich bin türke, mich hat ein deutscher zu einem fußsklaven degradiert