by ItsWritten
Great love story and the fulfillment of most men's and their daughters desires.....fucking each other. Time for him to teach the finer points.............
Wow, what a incredible love story between father and daughter. The way in which you wrote was also incredible. I was really impressed with the way you told and described it. You made it seem so believable and natural, I couldn't help becoming totally immersed in it. Thanks for the feelings I got from reading your story.
A great submission. You kept it real instead of the silly stuff we see submitted on here daily.<p>Keep on keeping it real. We want more!
If only more daughters felt that way . We know that most fathers feel these desires for their daughters but how do we know how the daughters feel ? Fathers are scared to make a move for fear the daughter may tell their mother ; it's not quite so difficult for those who have a daughter but their mother is no longer around . Great story with a few small errors which don't take from the beauty of the story .
I forgot to say that you should pay a bit more attention to punctuations and sentence layout. No biggie, but it will make your stories more perfect. Commas, for instance was something i saw that were lacking in spots.<p>"I love you daddy" is an example. There should be a comma after <i>you</i>.<p>Also, you wayyyy overused the word <i>and</i> by putting it where you should've used <i>as</i>.<p>Otherwise, my previous entry stands. Great job!
Follow-up on how things go for the two in Europe. Does Daddy make Her Pregnant. Does the Ex Hear of Daughter being Pregnant and Want to be apart of her Grandchild Life?