All Comments on 'For Pete's Place Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hi Alex

Writing this in the hope that you haven't dropped this story. I find it fascinating and am checking every day to see if the next part has popped up! I can't wait to see what happens between (Story)Alex and Pete. I really feel for (Story)Alex at the end of this chapter. I've had similar epiphanies and know she's in for a rough few days. I just hope she is able to open up to Pete (and herself, now that dam has broken) before its too late.

Cammy22Cammy22over 2 years ago

Very nice story, although in my opinion it escalated a little too quickly. Hope you are not rushing this as Alex went straight from daily blowjob to basically getting fucked during an orgy by 10+ people. Anyway I liked the story so far and I like your writing.

Veronica_E_DayVeronica_E_Dayabout 2 years ago

This is a lovely story and this is a excellent point to continue the story with the transition of Alex and further trials and tribulations. Do consider a continuing the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Will there be no new chapters on this?

mrdangerzonemrdangerzoneover 1 year ago

Phenomenal story, really want another part!

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