by AlexRaymond22
Hi Alex
Writing this in the hope that you haven't dropped this story. I find it fascinating and am checking every day to see if the next part has popped up! I can't wait to see what happens between (Story)Alex and Pete. I really feel for (Story)Alex at the end of this chapter. I've had similar epiphanies and know she's in for a rough few days. I just hope she is able to open up to Pete (and herself, now that dam has broken) before its too late.
Very nice story, although in my opinion it escalated a little too quickly. Hope you are not rushing this as Alex went straight from daily blowjob to basically getting fucked during an orgy by 10+ people. Anyway I liked the story so far and I like your writing.
This is a lovely story and this is a excellent point to continue the story with the transition of Alex and further trials and tribulations. Do consider a continuing the story.