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All Comments on 'For the First Time'

by gingerpale

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I would suggest you develop the story little further.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

A nice start. I want to know a little more about your main character. It's her first threesome; what does she fear? Does she know the girl? What does she desire? I like the "what comes next" ending. Is there a hint at it?

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