by tarkatony
This story was very well written, but could have been shortened to move it along faster. Where was the wife?
Very well written author - you developed a sense for the characters emotions and unforeseeable desires. A well created strong setting building towards his uncomfortable acceptance(?) of her change into an unpredictable sex driven woman.
Pandora's box has now been opened and he knows uncomfortably that he is no longer in charge of thier path towards new sensual acts. A nice job of creating his hesitency and tentative position as she drives them forward.
It seems likely that he will not accept where she may want to go as he does not appear to be as favorably disposed to sharing as she has seen so far. Too radical a change in his acceptance levels may distort the entertaining believeabilities you have created thus far.
Nice work author - twill be interesting - thanks and Regards
I'm very fortunate to have a mate who loves seeing me make LOVE to other women. She says it makes her feel more loved.
Who am I to complain? Better - who am I to deny her? Especially when it is so much fun for me. Loving one woman while having sex with another is just delirious fun. And if all three of us are in love? Delicious beyond belief.
Our best was the year we spent loving a lesbian. My mate would be impaled on me and in addition would be madly making out with the lesbian. Eye candy to be sure. I had 4 DDs at my disposal. I never had penetrative sex with the lesbian. But we did love and fondle each other a LOT. The best was when the lesbian sat on my face and my mate was riding the pole. Both kissing madly and me with the 4 DDs close at hand. Even if I couldn't see them I could get my hand in. ;-)
Or the mate would be sitting in my lap facing away while the lesbian and I kissed over the mate's shoulder. As I said: "we were all in love."
Or the mate and I would gang up on the lesbian's breasts. And then after a while we did a rotation until all 6 breasts had been sucked.
BTW the mate and I are still going strong after 36 years and a family anyone would be proud of.
I enjoyed this story very much except for the incorrect use of lingerie names.
A teddy is a one piece garment also called a body suit or, my favourite, camiknickers. The garment you describe sounds more like a camisole.
A negligee is just another name for a robe although it is usually largely transparent. It is not something usually worn to bed.
I am probably alone in finding this irritating but it irritates the shit out of my and is an unnecessary blemish on an enjoyable story.