All Comments on 'For the Honour of Clan Tavish'

I do agree with TLC56, is there more to this wonderful tale. I see a possible struggle but also a happy ending??

Will you be writing more? Please do

Again a great tale.

This absolutely lovely. You have two interesting, well crafted characters here. It leads me to want more, but at the same time be satisfied. You have some true talent.

Your writing is sensual with just the right psychological undercurrent to spice things up. I hope to read many more of your stories.

Can't believe I'm saying this about erotica, but this was really tasteful. Thank you for a brilliant piece. Do write more. You've got a fan

This was really good and has the potential for a great on-going tale. I hope you start writing again.

Extremely well written. Super hot! Loved it!

Please write more. This could go so far. It was tasteful and my heart aches for them. I'd like to know how this goes.

Oh, please write more.... this is so wonderful

Well written, beautiful, will be watching for more from this super talent!

Please write more.

Love love loved this! Feel like it should be written into a full length novel, i would buy it in a second just to experience the entire story of this couple! Beautifully written ☺

just wow. you sir are very talented. i realy like the Transformation of her Feeling and also his conflict between love and honor. it would be nice to read more about this 2 highlanders in the future.,

This is absorb-able. Fantastic writing.

Oh My Goodness! This was soooo amazing. I hope you write another chapter.

Waking, I smell the cold, hard-tamped earthen floor under me, and the small, smoky peat fire across the hut. It gives no light, little heat to warm my shivering nakedness. A flash of light and a flurry of cool, fresh air fills the rude enclosure, announcing his return, and I pray to God oh not again even as I want him more than my next breath.

To be honest, I usually skip to the good stuff when I come here but this one is a diamond in the rough. I absolutely love this story and the concept is very original, I think. Bonus is it's HOT. I'm about to go buy my man a kilt!

Scottish people simply don't talk like this no matter what part of Scotland they hail from.

Never have, Never will

hey McKenna:)

amazing passion play between the captive and the captor !! :) such a touching and terrible desperation and eventual success of Aengus to cut off the shackles of rapism.....and unleash the super passionate and tender lover in him!!

perhaps coz abducting an innocent girl,keeping her captive and ravaging her,to take revenge on his rival tribe....was evidently not satiating his manliness!! but Aengus felt it redeemed and fulfilled the day she too felt utterly pleasured by their erotic union,even pining and longing for the more that was never to be!! :)

But he is bound by promise to his tribe to abandon her after that 'living in paradise' day...which he does,crestfallen and wistfully by the end of the story!! :((

Cudnt you please give us more chapters where all the complications are solved eventually...and Aengus and Alannah live happily ever after in their own little passion paradise?!! :)

Love this story!! More please! A prequel? A sequel?

The name seem familiar from disney brave . Maybe im mistaken but amazing story . Im dreanched.

Where is the sequel? It's a great story, can't wait for more!

please keep going i want to know how it goes on

Excellent and well written more please!!!!

An excellent fuck story with a plot within both Alannah and Aengus minds and feelings. She had been raped, but at last she was seduced. A love that may or may not continue. Maybe with the birth of their son? Well written and a great lovemaking scene.

I read this book years ago. They eventually got married. It's a good story.

Is there a complete story? Where can I read it?

Where is it available? I can't tell you how many times I've read this story.

I'll save you all the trouble. The name of the book is " The sins of the Sire" (dark Highland Passions series)

It’s not The Sins of the Sire, I have just read it and the story is a bit different.

Would have liked the whole story from the beginning of the abduction. It was good but Id rather start at the beginning instead of having the abduction be a back story. Still very good story.

Rape as romance is never a good story.

This was hot!

I have read this many, many times over several years. It remains one of my all time favorite short stories of my adult life! Wish there was more to it....