All Comments on 'For the Honour of Clan Tavish'

I have read this many, many times over several years. It remains one of my all time favorite short stories of my adult life! Wish there was more to it....

This was hot!

Rape as romance is never a good story.

Would have liked the whole story from the beginning of the abduction. It was good but Id rather start at the beginning instead of having the abduction be a back story. Still very good story.

It’s not The Sins of the Sire, I have just read it and the story is a bit different.

I'll save you all the trouble. The name of the book is " The sins of the Sire" (dark Highland Passions series)

Where is it available? I can't tell you how many times I've read this story.

Is there a complete story? Where can I read it?

I read this book years ago. They eventually got married. It's a good story.

An excellent fuck story with a plot within both Alannah and Aengus minds and feelings. She had been raped, but at last she was seduced. A love that may or may not continue. Maybe with the birth of their son? Well written and a great lovemaking scene.

Excellent and well written more please!!!!

please keep going i want to know how it goes on

Where is the sequel? It's a great story, can't wait for more!

The name seem familiar from disney brave . Maybe im mistaken but amazing story . Im dreanched.

Love this story!! More please! A prequel? A sequel?

hey McKenna:)

amazing passion play between the captive and the captor !! :) such a touching and terrible desperation and eventual success of Aengus to cut off the shackles of rapism.....and unleash the super passionate and tender lover in him!!

perhaps coz abducting an innocent girl,keeping her captive and ravaging her,to take revenge on his rival tribe....was evidently not satiating his manliness!! but Aengus felt it redeemed and fulfilled the day she too felt utterly pleasured by their erotic union,even pining and longing for the more that was never to be!! :)

But he is bound by promise to his tribe to abandon her after that 'living in paradise' day...which he does,crestfallen and wistfully by the end of the story!! :((

Cudnt you please give us more chapters where all the complications are solved eventually...and Aengus and Alannah live happily ever after in their own little passion paradise?!! :)

Scottish people simply don't talk like this no matter what part of Scotland they hail from.

Never have, Never will

To be honest, I usually skip to the good stuff when I come here but this one is a diamond in the rough. I absolutely love this story and the concept is very original, I think. Bonus is it's HOT. I'm about to go buy my man a kilt!

Waking, I smell the cold, hard-tamped earthen floor under me, and the small, smoky peat fire across the hut. It gives no light, little heat to warm my shivering nakedness. A flash of light and a flurry of cool, fresh air fills the rude enclosure, announcing his return, and I pray to God oh not again even as I want him more than my next breath.

Oh My Goodness! This was soooo amazing. I hope you write another chapter.

This is absorb-able. Fantastic writing.

just wow. you sir are very talented. i realy like the Transformation of her Feeling and also his conflict between love and honor. it would be nice to read more about this 2 highlanders in the future.,

Love love loved this! Feel like it should be written into a full length novel, i would buy it in a second just to experience the entire story of this couple! Beautifully written ☺

Please write more.

Well written, beautiful, will be watching for more from this super talent!

Oh, please write more.... this is so wonderful

Please write more. This could go so far. It was tasteful and my heart aches for them. I'd like to know how this goes.

Extremely well written. Super hot! Loved it!

This was really good and has the potential for a great on-going tale. I hope you start writing again.

Can't believe I'm saying this about erotica, but this was really tasteful. Thank you for a brilliant piece. Do write more. You've got a fan

Your writing is sensual with just the right psychological undercurrent to spice things up. I hope to read many more of your stories.

This absolutely lovely. You have two interesting, well crafted characters here. It leads me to want more, but at the same time be satisfied. You have some true talent.

I do agree with TLC56, is there more to this wonderful tale. I see a possible struggle but also a happy ending??

Will you be writing more? Please do

Again a great tale.

This is absolutely wonderful writing. I see you haven't written for awhile. Please tell me you have a complete novel out there somewhere so I can finish reading this wonderful story. I usually don't comment, but I sense a gifted writer. Please continue, for we will all benefit from your wonderful creations.

Exquisite!

Wonderfully written with a pure and beautiful voice. Great job.

Yes, Please tell us more! What happens next.

You have to tell us what happens

Continue with the story

PLEASE!! Continue this story!

Romance? Get over yourselves.

More pls.

I love historical romances. My all time favorites. Please do continue. I never looked away from the words you wrote. You had my full attention. Looking forward to chapter 2 of For the Honour of Clan McTavish!

Wow one of the best I've read! please finish!

Please please PLEASE!! Continue this story!

You have fed my need for historical romances with some extra sex in the mix. I wish you would add more to this story. I am really enjoying the main characters. I hope you would continue with this series. I think it would be worth it and the readers would go crazy for it as well. Thanks for feeding my hunger! :-) Syn'

c'mon pray do tell us the ending!

Makes me want to go and grab a hanna howel novel

Please please PLEASE!! Continue this story! There's sooo much more to tell...

Thou Cannae

or Willnae !?!

Deliteful story , deliteful Scottish highlander brogue !! pl. keep on writin' !

where's the rest?

i agree we need more of this, a real story as well as the exciting sexual aspect

I liked it a lot. One of the better stories I've read on this site. The fact that it was a sexy Scot made it all the better. Only qualm is with continuity; at one point you described her eyes as brown, then they were green. Please, keep writing.

More! Needs a sequel. Brilliant work keep writing.

i loved the story and it really captivated me but the whole Scottish side of it turned me off

Well written. Needs a part two.

excellent writing...need more like this!!

This story is so well written and ensnares the reader - please write a second chapter!

All her family has to do is kill the child.His brother will still be dead along with his child.Some revenge!Stupid men!Please finish the story.

Well done

This was so well-written and it's left such a huge impression on me as I first read this a couple weeks ago. I didn't have time to comment then, but wanted to come back and say, "Bravo!"

Simply a masterpiece!

She will kill the child when it is born and have it sent to him.

Wow, what a pleasure to find such a well-written story here. Beautiful, moving, concise... Thank you for sharing your talent.

This is very well written and it would be a crime to not complete it...Please I'm dying of curiosity to find out what happens next...

I was honestly shocked to find something like this here. This story was amazing and well written. Please write more!

i've read this a couple of times and its power still holds...a lot emotions were able to be conveyed on a slice of story...do i wish it could be developed further? certainly...but as it is, it's one helluva example of powerful writing

I love this! Best revenge story I've read. A nice, succinct snapshot into a complicated relationship.

Best story on the site. Why did you stop writing?

One of the best best best stories I've read - and I don't just mean erotica!

You're a good writer, wish there were more submissions like this.

you can't stop now!! come on please keep going with this!

i agree with every1... sequel. the story is too good to stand alone need more

Anon below, nope, you're not the only one. :)

I do understand though, McKenna, how sometimes a story is just done. You write beautifully and I have long since favorited you. :)

i'm sure i'm not the only one rooting for a sequel;

SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!

You gotta finish it to where they both succumb to the feelings they have for each other...the McTavish has to keep her! This is on a par with the historical romance novels I read; but this is more raw. Love it!

I can't thank you enough for your knowledgeable and talented use of diction and grammar! I majored in English Literature in college and read vanilla literary works extensively for pleasure. I've enjoyed many of the stories here on Literotica but often have to fight to get past grammatical errors and stiff language. Your story was a pleasure to read in multiple senses and I highly encourage you to continue writing!

A well paced and engaging read such as this is hard to find. I thoroughly enjoyed this

It is a shame he won't give in to his true feelings in the end

i always come back to this story and i love it. please write more! please!

u should really write a sequel to this.

This is the story I wish I had written! I love it

pretty please.

for not finishing this story. UGH!!! It is so rare to find a great story on this site, so I guess I'll just have to make due with re-reading this story from time to time. You still suck though.

Uhm, ever read Diana Gabaldon? ;)

Your stroy was excellent! more please!

Oh, too bad it's short. I think this would really be great if you continue it. (oh please do continue, hehe :) Nice plot. I like it.

I loved this story but ended to soon so I rate it 3 stars just for the end nothing else.

please finish!

That was wonderful, but unfortunately a story you havent added even though you have the content to extend. I hope one day you continue Alannah and Aengus's passionate tale.

to read. i loved it. Maybe youmcould write a follow up or even give the idea to a highland novel author..... Or even better you could turn this into a little novel of your own. Its too good to let go of.

Being of Centic/Viking heritage, I appreciate your allowing my presence in the room so I could witness their dialogue, pride, and passion. What a treat! You are a treasure.

Thank you for a lovely, steadily exciting and arousing story.

It can't end this way. There has to be a happy ending. They belong together.

And I agree, this should be a manuscript1 I would buy it.

Basicly you should write books, this story was well thought out, and worth my time to read. Feel free to do much more, i am most excited to read your next installment.

The character development was slow and steady. I enjoyed that you did not tell us who the characters were but showed us through their own thoughts and emotions. Great story and I appreciated the simple ending.

Hey ! I just had chance to read it - too bad that you haven't continued.

That I hadn't read this before, McKenna.

You did such a lovely job with the characters. You revealed them bit by bit, what they were doing, why, and how torn each of them were by it.

Excellent work. I was enthralled.

Amazing story. I was so into it! You really should write books. That was amazing. I was to move to scotland now . lol

I am very glad I read it...

to let curiosity get the better of me. Boy am I glad I did. This story is hot and emotional, well written and makes me yearn for more. I want back story and to know the ending of their tale. I hope you do finish it up, it would make a fantastic novel. I'm in awe.

This is incredible, McK! The writing was novel quality, and I loved how Aengus shifted from cruel and hard to tender! Please let me know when you add to this.

This story was very exciting....I too felt like it could have continued but I have no complains about it...Your descriptions made the story easy to imagine...I hope you write more...