by julie_hypnotic
What a lovely story, written not only with intelligence but also warmth and compassion. What is splendid is the understanding and sympathy the writer shows for both lovers. She makes their rising passion as much a product of their need for genuine love as it is an outpouring of their irrepressible natural attraction. The tale is filled with eroticism of surprising power as the young woman and the old man satisfy each others' long-felt needs.
I hope Clarissa enjoys being a teenage widowed mom. Other than that, the story is great.
Being a midle age woman I can understand how Tom felt for young Clarissa. It's a wonderful warm and passionate story that made me read it without leaving it. I am a writer and I think you did a very good job. Congratulations Julie....
Gentle, Im heading for Toms age,sadly we dont have the Greyhound service in England. Lets hope it happens for me on a train. a lovely piece of erotic fiction,you left me wanting to learn more about Tom and Clarrisa. thankyou.Steve
This is the way all "porn" should be written.
You have allowed the characters to grow to fill the page and you feel for them.
Having married a woman much younger than I this story touched a special place in my... ahh 'heart'.
Thank you and please write more ASAP.
This has got to be the most wonderfully intelligent and tender and sexy story I have ever read! A true pleasure to read, very well done!!!
and a real pleasure to read.
Love and tenderness at its most finest.
Thank you Julie.
. . . well-written, erotic and one that fills an older man with hope and expectation.
Brilliant! What more can I say? As a fellow writer you leave me in awe
every now and then i stumble across a story on this site i wish i had written. this goes to the top of the list.
i also wish you hadn't stopped.
I enjoyed this story very much! I need a reminder from time to time that we are not ALL dirty old men. We have so much passion and love still in our old bones!! Thank you.
I was completely engrossed as i read this story of love, compassion, and commitment. I hope the rest of your stories are as captivating.