All Comments on 'For The Love of Family'

This is a repost, right? co'z I remembered reading this exact same story

And everyone lived happily ever after except Darryl the dumb ass

allyour stories are good.

love your stories

you continue to prove you are the best author on this sight i love your stories and writing style so easy to read and i always want more. thank you

Very well done. Darryl was such an SOB that he got exactly what he deserved. Gary and Carly had their dreams come true, and Emily was the perfect frosting on the cake.

It was really hot that the three of them got together and made a family.

Thanks for the good read

I like romance in these stories and this had it. I also like the happy ending for the three of them. I've read several of your stories and really have enjoyed them. Keep entertaining us like this.

And then they go to prison. 60% ...ha! Laughed my ass off there. He wouldn't even need to file! He could probably get an annulment on grounds of lack of understanding on the bitches part. (Joke) Fuck my life sixty percent. Hubby turns states evidence, bro and sissy go to jail. Humiliation all around, hubby gets lots of pity fucks from chicks interested in the dude who was married to the crazy, hot brother-fucker. Brother becomes prison bitch for guys in prison who think cool with incest=cool with M+/M, and who are reminded by his incest of childhood sexual abuses and as such, pissed off. Sounds like wind blowing when he farts. Sister gives birth to child in women's prison infirmary, child is delivered to social services, as she is unfit mother due to incestuous tendencies. Nobody wins, everybody loses. Well...everybody who hears the brother fart and dies laughing wins but.... (Ha..."butt") Thank You.

Loved the story, although I thought it would was too bad the husband had to turn out like that. It was his idea and his setup after all. If he had just let her keep fucking her brother, brother could have still wed Emily and they could have coexisted as two couples and been best friends, raising the kids together. I'm sure that Daryll would have enjoyed a chance to fuck Emily on a regular basis as one of the fringe benefits of such a group marriage.

how many of you brainless testadicazzo's even READ the goddamn story? It was his idea??????????? The fucking SOB of a BROTHER out and out admitted to WANTING to fuck his sister at the START of the story! And the hubby, darryl, the ratbastardscumsucker -joking here obviously-, made him his BEST MAN! ie, he TRUSTED the piece of pedophile shit. and it was CARLYS desire to have her brothers fucking KID!! how did the brilliant and ever so faithful champion of mother and womanhood think that was gonna happen? SPERM DONATION?? can you say PRISON??? apparently not. the brain cells jest aint there. So the husband, despite his stated desire to be the one to impregnate his OWN GODDAMNED WIFE! Lovingly acqiesces to his adored wifes desire to have her lecherous brothers bastard, his only request being that it not be rubbed in his face etc. in order to make things easier on all involved, he decides to present it as a sort of surpise gift, simultaneously seperating the event as far from their marriage bed as possible. he foolishly trusts his wife to realize his love for her was all that drove him, and his brother in law to behave as an honorable man. when neither o these things happens, and he is cuckolded by his wife and treated as though he deserves it and he instigated it...when he gets a touch angry, it maes him the villian of the piece. and even MORE evil is the fact that he, as he explicitly stated in the beginning and his wife agreed, is unwilling to SHARE his monagamous partner, the impregnation having been agreed firmly as a one time event. HOW EVILLLLLL!!!!111!! in point of fact dezurtdawg is to blame. all that bullshit at the beginning about clinics and so on is just hand waving to set up a loving gesture by a husband that makes him into a cuckold. it also makes Carly look like she has an IQ of 2 but hey misogyny is ok when we're just writing cuckold incest erotica. particularly the obviously unintended lazy kind resulting from unchallenged assumptions. Carly is simply the formless pussy of the moment, I need not consider how this or that scene affects her character because she doesnt have one. she is a fleshy blowup doll. which, in the end is really what pissed me off about this story. the vapid, blank, empty females. just placeholders for male pleasure. shit. just realizing this fyi but the rest is still valid so...vaffancina lol. it stays. toodles and thanks for reading

If the story is so bad and everybody in it is so evil, why the hell are you reading it? How do you know so many details about something so evil?

Did your wife catch you reading it? Or was it your mother that caught you?

It's a fucking fantasy, like a fairy tale......

If you don't like it, fine, go find some other story.

Another fine story you have written. As for the rest of the assholes out, well they can go fuck themselves. Im getting ready to have my wife and lover both together. So if in the lines of your story but no incest is being commited . Continue your writing.

Thank you

WD

Yup, the story is absolutely unreal and masculinely stupid, but it is fun in some way. But the anonymous comments are fun.

Hey, Aurimaz, see the comments from Meltnmold. I suppose you left a 1 star as your vote, If you don't like this author's writing, reformat your hard drive and change your religion to Shakers, Quakers, or maybe even Islam.

Hi Dawg, thanks for a super hot and sexy read! So glad the wimp of a hubby got out of the picture. Call it intuition but I guessed correctly that Emily would get in the family way too besides Carly and be wedded to our hero.

Btw I hope you'll be posting new stories soon (when your real life can take a back seat.) Looking forward to them!

I like the stories like this one in which the caring is a strong element of the plot. Please continue to combine respect and affection and caring with the delicious eroticism.

Lance

I was trying to figure out about the five children did Carly have twins and how many did Emily have..

So I am really confused. Did you stop reading before you got to the end? The last real paragraph has the following in it: "The two loves of my life are still here with me, along with our five children. Carly only had the twins Mark and Marcia, having her tubes tied after the birth to prevent any more side effects from our love making. Emily had her first, Chad, three days after Carly gave birth!"

I thought that was about as clear as I could write it. YES!!! Carly had twins! Emily had the rest but not all at once.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

dezurtdawg

Ending somewhat expected, but twins...that made for five stars - I'm a twin with a twin sister.

I didn't have any trouble coming up with a five member family. By the way, excellent story, please keep up the great work.

My sister and myself are both married to the same guy who still fucks his own sister too .

Happy family Muah xx Zoe xx

I've been binging your stories the past few days, and I left this one for last because of the "other man asking me to knock up his wife" aspect of the story. I am so happy that you gave us a happy ending, and it has instantly made this one of my favorite of your stories.

I hope you are able to keep up the good work, and more importantly, that you enjoy doing so!

I liked it very much. You are a good writer.

have been 5* if you would have left Emily out. Soooooo, how many nights does he sleep alone in a week now?? Every night?? Boy toy....

Mmm. I knew that I would love this one as i Absolutely Love Brother, Sister Impregnation

Well done! Sexy, logical—for a fantasy—and not only had an ending, but a good feel one to boot.

Loved it with a full 5 stars.

Bill S.

A Good, sexy story. And as i have commented about other stories and what i look for, i Really appreciated that this story included some intimacy. 5

Great story, love it. AAAAAA++++++

Great story with some good twists, but TOO many babies . . .

Good story, Great ending, thank you.

I came at least 3 times.

The 5 children are all grown up and their rich father has paid their tuition to university...