All Comments on 'For The Rest of Your Life'

Love the fact that the vengence is eternal, as it should be.

5/5

Pretty good episode of The Twilight Zone. Should have left off the author’s note.

Nicely done, well written and original. I agree that author's note spelling out the obvious is unnecessary although the intro is appreciated.

Great story. Like the unusual twists in your stories.

It only took a little time to get the point about the 'illegal entry'. Boy, the way some people hold grudges. Also makes a pretty good argument about why cheating on your spouse is bad for your health. I did enjoy the story as it was an entertaining short story with a moral. Thanks

Nothing wrong with including metaphysical elements into your story. Job well done. Thank you!

What an original and entertaining story. I liked the "Twilight Zone" feel to the story. I half expected Rod Serling to make an appearance at the end. Thank you for such an intriguing story.

I liked this story a lot, it definitely had that twilight zone/outer limits vibe and was entertaining. Well done, 5* from this reader.

She deserves everything she gets!!!

Bloody brilliant. Sad he had to pass on, but a brilliant story

5/5

Superb!

Superb. Sad that Mike saw fit to end his life distraught over a worthless whore

Clever.

Very well constructed story.

Good job providing us the ability to willing suspend disbelief.

Short but great story!

It's unanimous! Great story line. Well done. Keep writing.

XYZ

UNIQUE story. Very well done.

Loved the paranormal angle.!

5 big stars, I think it also brings to light the narcissism inherent in women how no more sex for them is a "nightmare" where as if it was anyone else it would be "it's not the end of the world" or "get over it, it is just sex"

Pretty creative story.

I agree with the comments of “ anon, 5 big stars”.

exactly, and I give it 5 stars too.

Very imaginative and slightly twisted. My kind of story. 5 stars. DMW aka Sumnut96

Death equals death of sex

It is the middle ground between light and shadow, between science and superstition, and it lies between the pit of man's fears, and the summit of his knowledge. This is the dimension of imagination. It is an area which we call, The Twilight Zone.

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Well done!

You play, you pay! One way or the other.

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