by MarquisSlade
Very well written and hot.
Good pacing to the action and plot.
Now that you've given us a good teaser, the readers will definitely be wanting more.
KEEP WRITING - you're good!
I want to know what happened when Josh came back to Forbidden to be owned by Louis...i need to know it please
I wish so much that this was longer and there was more to it. The idea is so HOT and amazing i just wish so much that there was MORE!!!!