All Comments on 'Forbidden'

by MarquisSlade

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smoothboismoothboiover 9 years ago

Yeah. I want to get turned out like that.

WeyrcubWeyrcubover 9 years ago
A GOOD INTRO

Very well written and hot.

Good pacing to the action and plot.

Now that you've given us a good teaser, the readers will definitely be wanting more.

KEEP WRITING - you're good!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Please

I want to know what happened when Josh came back to Forbidden to be owned by Louis...i need to know it please

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Gods!

I wish so much that this was longer and there was more to it. The idea is so HOT and amazing i just wish so much that there was MORE!!!!

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