All Comments on 'Forbidden Ch. 21'

Chapter 21 is an exciting chapter, building up to some sort of climactic conclusion that the reader can only guess at. Although perhaps rather too short, this engaging drama is well-written, and fully deserves a five star rating.

The part with Zoe's stepping out and completely ignoring her living room seems a bit unrealistic, I must say.

Otherwise, everything is just perfect! Love the descriptions.

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

ANY TIME YOU CAN SEED YOUR SISTER INLAW OR ANYBODY ELSE'S WIFE THAT IS GREAT.