All Comments on 'Forbidden Desires Ch. 01'

Great story..of two people who pleasured one another.......

I actually had a step-daughter though she was not married and still lived at home that seduced me and we loved our private time alone........

By the end of the story I was laughing out loud at all those incongruous "3/4"s.<p>

Liked the story otherwise, even though it was obviously very rushed. People work up to these things. Family members don't just go from never having had any sexual intimacy to full blown sex over the course of one french bread pizza. They'd hesitantly test the waters and begin attempting to push the boundaries for a bit before they'd completely throw caution to the wind and have at it...

Loved the story, but it would have been better without the spelling mistakes.

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Hard to read, due to all the spelling mistakes - and what the hell are all the <i>3/4</i>s that are scattered throughout?

Yea I missed some spelling errors, and as for the funky 3/4 and all that stuff, it is where this system did not properly read my doc. and inserted those instead of the symbils that were suposed to be there.

A really good theme that the story has, and it could get to be very kinky, especially if the sweet little girl leaves her husband and moves in with her step dad. I'm sure if that ever happens, she will have a well used little pussy. Thanks for the post....Rich

Awesome story! Very arousing!