All Comments on 'Forbidden Fruit Ch. 01-05'

Great story so far!!! You have got me hooked and I can’t wait to read more of this wonderful story!!!

Pretty hot... will there be more?

Hope young arrogant Brad gets his. What an asshole!!!

Readers should be warned that this story meanders on for 45 chapter and never actually gets to any real brother/sister action (beyond some teasing). Not that it's a bad story, just very much mislabeled.

Thanks "Anon 1 year ago" for the warning. It can be a frustratingly long read for many.

Most people who come here to read these stories are looking for characters with good redeeming qualities that deserve good things to happen to them. Brad and his friend(s) are worthless pieces of shit who have nothing at all positive about themselves. They abuse and disrespect all women and rejoice in that behavior. 😤

Maybe you have some sort of comeuppance planned for Brad in a future installment or maybe you're going to have him turn over a new leaf. Either way, I'm not wasting my time to read this crap story any further and find out. If you're going to write a story, then your Protagonist should be someone that the audience will like and have empathy for. I'm voting this down with a 1/5.