All Comments on 'Forbidden Pleasures Pt. 01'

Great first story. Keep writing!

I really was beginning to enjoy it, but you completely lost me at hairy armpits and bush.

HOT! blew my load right at the end. Sure hope there will be more from you

I assume English is not you 1st language, ok story but poor grammar and diction made it hard work

Truly erotic presentation. Extremely well written. The buildup was pure beautiful agony and the climax (son mates mom) was sooooo sensuous. Easily one of the Best in Category ever. Made my day and I’ll be looking for succeeding days, months and years in this relationship. Please drag it out. TY

Some very realistic emotions and actions. Seeing mom's hairy pussy makes a powerful and lasting impression on a guy. many women like to tease son and make him jo for her.

Hot story next time don't capitalize so many lines and write more to this story

Can handle some lengthy hair (pubes), but total turn off “hanging diwn her legs? Jesus, that belongs in fetesh category ad much as you described it. Then fawned e en more? Sorry dude. 2*

Great except for the hair

I'm with Leo Rose. I was into it until I wasnt.

I get people have a kink for hair but Jesus christ. Had a good start, but I had to stop reading after 2 pages. We get it. You like hair.

Was pretty good...but hairy women just aren't my thing

The grammar in the story or the grammar from the recent posts/comments. This story needed an editor. For example it’s jiggling not giggling. Then there was the reverse of words and the story flowed like it was being told by a kid going through puberty. I can’t believe it broke a four star rating. *

I love the detailed descriptions of her hairiness. As a hairy pussy lover (and hairy armpit lover), it’s always a turn on to read stories from a fellow hair lover! Keep it up and please write more.

A valiant first effort! Although im not a hairy fan, i still enjoyed the story. A few mistakes and misspellings but you're on the right track my friend. Try to find an editorif you can, but most of all don't be discouraged by the anonymous trolls and keep writing, you don't get better unless you practice. All the best and hope to read more from you soon

While the storyline itself had promise, it was very hard to read due to the large number of spelling and grammatical errors. My suggestion to the author would be to solicit the help of an editor before publishing your next story.

Love the hair!! Love the hair! So hot!

Very hot story! Loved all the tantalizing mom teasing and the very descriptive details of her sexy hairy body and private strip shows!! HOT!!

Loved this story and how a horny mother and horny son got together and had hot sex. though I don't like hairy armpits I love a hairy bush. You should have continued with more and have mom divorce her worthless husband and give them plenty of time together! Gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Teenage fantasy story written perfectly.

Great story!! Really enjoyed the sexy hairy mom teasing her son in the pool!!

Unlike the previous commenter, I had to stop reading after the hairy armpit description in the pool. Sorry, most men naturally find that gross. It may be natural, but so are varicose veins, stretch marks, gray hair, bald heads, pot bellies, nose hairs, lots of hair growing out of an old man's ears, hairy backs, etc... Not everything natural, is attractive.

You lost me at armpit hair. *