All Comments on 'Forced'

i persaonally have been on both sides of submissive and domantae roles. your story would have more impacted if you showed what the where thinking.

This sounds more like a rape than a sub scene. I always thought brutal sex was usually thought thro first, the sub needs to have a certain amount of control, this seemed too one sided for me :-(

I agree that this is more about rape than domination. It lacks depth. As a submissive myself, I wanted to know what Cierra was thinking and feeling. Part of being submissive is giving yourself and allowing yourself to be dominated. It's part of an unspoken contract. I know it was called Forced and that should have been a clue, but the guy demanding she call him 'sir' doesn't make it a BDSM story.

I love the beginning but.... You should have added alot more sexual detail and made it a long story. More force and making her crave him again. Just alot alot more. U could have done an amazing job on it. Make this an intro and create a story out of it

I agree with the criticisms of the other commentators in that you need more development of the characters to really draw the reader in, but don't pay any attention to their politically correct concepts of rape vs D/s. What on Earth did they expect from the title "Forced" anyway. You have something here, and I hope to see more of it. We as a society need to come to terms that sometimes (and I do mean only some times) women achieve their best orgasm when they are raped, and the most important thing is that they should not be ashamed of it.

This really isn't the place to deal with the Neanderthal opinion expressed by the previous commenter, but here's what I have to say about your story. BDSM is, above all, consensual, and this story simply does not portray a BDSM relationship. That it features one party declaring out of the blue that he will now make all the decisions for both of them does not make it BDSM. Nor does the fact that the word "submission" appears, nor that he demands that she call him "Sir." This is not political correctness, this is accuracy. Your story is primarily a non-consent scenario, and there's a category for that.

For me, ultimately this story doesn't work. You haven't given us enough of who these people are as individuals, and what their history as a couple contains, to make this series of events seem plausible. I think it could be expanded and work very well as a non-consent story, though, and I'd love to see you do that. You've got interesting ideas and you can write well

One more thing... I don't see why you included "collaring" as a tag, since there's no mention of it anywhere.