All Comments on 'Forced by My Long Lost Father'

Don't quit your day job. This is pathetic.

Very disgusting. Not funny, not interesting, just bad.

I Enjoyed The Story.. Not A Bad Family After All

This story was great. Ignore the losers with negative commentary. It was really well written. I felt like I was in the head of this virginal LDS girl and could understand her acting out against her mother. The people were actually realistic and flawed.

Anyone who comments it's disgusting is trying to kink shame and THAT is pathetic. Unless she's trying to talk about the fact that the setting was disgusting, in which case that's a compliment, since that's obviously what you were going for.

I also didn't get the feeling you were aiming for comedy, so I'm not sure why ShadowRosie felt the need to point it out. If you're looking for humour, try using tags or reading the appropriate genre, ya bimbo.

This is very good. And very true to life.

I have never came so herd

I LOVED the filthiness of this story. Your details were great and, regardless of what others think, portray a very real family in their very real house. Thank you for the orgasm!

I came to this :)

Hot. I wish my dad would be down

Great story! Nice change of pace from most on here, also very well written. Kudos!

What a wonderful story, so well-written. I wanted it to go on forever. I came thinking of and missing my Papa. Thank you so much!

That story was so fucking wrong but I got so turned on by it I had a tent in my pants reading it would have loved if she got her ass fucked as well!!!