All Comments on 'Forced Ch. 11'

I love how you've changed it to Scott's perspective. Brilliant!

i loved the subtle change on his submission and the different perspective when he came inside him at the end

i'm not sure if scott isn't a dirty bastard but this is incredibly hot and i GOTTA know what happens next!

it was good when the sex just drunkenly happened the first time, but it was even better when he consciously submitted the second time. i loved it when he came in him at the end

The chapter's awesome. And I can hardly wait for the next one. But I'm more interested in Jason and his next stage of development. It would be great if he decided to embrace the life of a gay man and played around for awhile until he finds a nice sexy boyfriend (like Scott).

when is the next chapter coming, looking forward to reading the next chapter

I LOVE THIS STORY I LOVE ALL OF YOUR WORK!!!!!!! So please I am beagging you to finish this story and not leave us hanging as you have in the past with college experience and bathhouse visits i need to know how this story ends i have read it so many times and have come up with so many different ways it could end please put me out of my misery and tell all of us your faithful readers what happens next. thanks shelly

... for the next chapter and a conclusion of Jason's lustful journey.

i LOVE your storys but i dont like scotts point of veiw srry... CAN WE GO BACK TO JASON!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAY

Wow, what an intense story. I especially liked the tension over barebacking that occurs in a couple of chapters; it underscores Jason's struggle with being forced into a submissive bottom role. I would love to see additional chapters that deal with a few burning questions: 1) In Chapter 10 it seemed like Jason was starting to recovery his memory and accept his new role. Will he freak out again and require more force to subdue him? 2) Is there a battle brewing for 'ownership' of Jason with Doc and Tom on one side and Scott on the other side? 3) What happens when our well-fucked hero returns home and deals with his family? (That is, if Scott, Marcus, Doc and Tom even allow him to return home!) I'm a struggling writer myself, and I know it can be difficult to return to a story after a long break. But I'm hoping Nicky will do it for us!

This was refreshing as well as highly erotic. It could be interesting to read how Scott decided to bring Marcus into the party, sharing his "prize" -- how they conspired beforehand -- the "secret thoughts of gay men about to debauch a str8 guy!" One thing that was a bit confusing is -- didn't this all happen in the dark? How was Scott able to see Jason's body, etc.?

This series of short stories kept me intrigued and cumming back for more

Hope you write more about Jasons change

Loving this story keep it up!!

I want JASON AND SCOTT TOGETHER !!! =3

I want Jason & Scott together, too!!

Man, every single one of the "Forced" chapters was hot & heavy. I nearly passed out myself a couple of times reading this. Fantastic. Hope to read more of your stories.

Loved every minute of this series. Please finish it. I can't wait to see how it ends. I want Scott and Jason to end up together so bad.

One of, if not my favorite series on the site. Would be so psyched if you finished it. In the meantime, thank you for the contributions you have made. Your stories are wonderful!

I LOved loved loved it. Please finish it!! Just want to know what happens from Scotty's prespective. Hot darn!!!!!!!

Please let Jason and Scott end up together.They are sooo HOT.

Please continue with this great story. Would love to have a part in this story.

Very well written, liked the twist with the memory loss and the Jason's time with the Doc and Tom. Introducing Scott's perspective was a great idea as well and really expands the scope of the story. BUT JASON DEFINITELY NEEDS TO REGAIN HIS MEMORY!!!! (or at least enough so that he remembers Marcus and Scott's tenderness and concern). HE NEEDS TO "KISS AND MAKE UP" WITH THEM, ESPECIALLY SCOTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Plz finish this story soon :)

I am an anal virgin, and Jasons story really turned me on...I would love to get turned out by a guy like Scott.

I hope to read more of Jasons story soon.

I wish that this was still being up dated! :( So... Sad!

At the beginning of Chapter 11, you indicated that the next two chapters were from Scott's point of view. Do you plan to continue this series?

I think the Literotica story tellers are among the best ever, but nickymartin is, by far, the very best! A beautifully written, sexual story.

Love it

A really hot story. It is a wonder how a srtaight guy can go gay so quickly. I know because that is what happened to me. I really had nothing against gays, but thought it was wierd ghat a man eould want to have sex with another man. Boy, was I ever wrong. Once I sucked a cock, I couldnt get enough. Four days later I wss fu kef forthe first time. I remember the ndxt mornig. The guy eho had fucked me asked how I felt. I told him a little sore but also empty. I asked him to fu k md again. It felt grsat.

I feel like it wasn't necessary to write it word for word. I feel like I'd have liked to see more of his personal thoughts about what was happening between them etc. I feel like other than the pronouns changing, we didn't get any more than we had in ch. 1-2 It was hot, so I don't mind reading it again, but I hope you can do some more developing of what Scott is thinking as he develops feelings for Jay so it rolls into his being hurt when he doesn't remember him, etc