All Comments on 'Forever'

Thank you so much for that jewel. Now I have to explain why a grown man in a coffee shop on a lovely day is sniffling and dabbing his eyes like a little girl. It's all your fault, but I happily forgive you.

I'm a widower 61 year old and I cried my eyes out.

Thanks for sharing

I felt every word of this truly warm and touching story!

Wow!! This story has to be one of the best ones on this entire site. It was full of emotion and sensuality. It made me cry!!!

You have a great talent, please write more like this.

Thanks for a thoughtful story of the necessity of love in all stages of life especially the dying.

Should we be reading between the lines?? Are you or someone you know suffering?? It seems very close to the heart.

this sure was emotional. heart touching and intense.

This is a warm, beautiful, heartfelt and happy story! I said "Happy" because love makes living and dieing do-able! This is one of the few very good stories on this site - keep up the good work, I can hardly wait to read more of your stories!

CCH

Beautifully written and plotted...a terrific love story!

The story is beautiful an real. The set pieces and descriptions of Naples and its beach right on. Nice work.

As someone else said on these comments: You have a great talent, please write more like this. More, more, more!

You write an interesting tale of what our western world deems problematic kind of love. It seems only the young and the beautiful are entitled to this prized condition. Your story explores the possibilities in a wonderful context - BRAVO & Take a bow.

Peace

Gil

Five.

Quite a story, you brought tears to my eyes. TY for writing.

Exquisitely written, intensely painful, beautiful. More more more!

Very sad but beautiful. Great job Moondancer. Thank you.

Cool story but one thing bothered me. He's from Haiti so he has an Haitian accent, not French. French spoken in France is much different from French spoken in Haiti.

Why do women have such an affiliation with black cocks! There are white cooks that bigger! Look at John Holmes.