All Comments on 'Forever and Always'

Thanks for sharing.

Nothing really new tho. Pretty much the same bro n Sis incest story.

2 stars

DragonRider55

I liked this very much and I sincerely hope you consider a continuation of this story.

Gave you a well deserved 5!

very well written - and very sexy. great story from a first time writer on this site. i hope you keep this tales going - there's a lot more you can write here!!

Sweet and hot. A lovely read. I hope to see more of your writing.

Great writing! Loved the characters . Five stars . Keep em coming!

I like the way you wrote this, it was so real, so easy to invisage all that was happening.

5+* excellent

erotica that kept me reading till the end...great first story....Hope you could write more ...five stars

Really liked the story and hope there's at least one more chapter. Would like to know how Mouse and Big Mac deal with their parents return. Would also be nice to have a bit more background and the both of them. Are they at college, do they work etc.

The characters of Mouse and Big Mac are nicely drawn it would be a shame to waste them on just one chapter.

5 star and a great beginning....

Fairly well-written with likeable and believable characters. Not a good idea to pull a punch unless you're pretty sure the guy won't strike back. If you do a sequel I'll read it but it's been my experience that sequels rarely live up to the original. Thanks.

even though it had some grammer errors im still giving it a 5 because the plot was just so good and loving would love to see some sequals to see them as they go through life

I am looking forward to reading more chapters. Thanks for your time and efforts.

It was so sweet and sexy 😀 well written and cute characters

Really good story.

Lovely story, well written

Well worth 5/5

Great story and nicely written.

Very nice story and also very well written, Your descriptions of emotions were well done. Thanks! 5/5