All Comments on 'Forever My Love Ch. 04'

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CaramelunicornCaramelunicorn9 months ago

Sigh! When will David remember and Ben get his happy ending!

BarefootmarvellBarefootmarvell9 months ago

The only thing I need now is for Jim, his mom Elena and Claudia to be exposed from all their dirty plans of disrupting Ben and David's love life through their lies and deceit. I have a feeling that MichaelAngelo belongs to Ben and David, Leah never existed, it's just my thoughts. I can't wait for chapter 5

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

a good read...and i hunger for the next chapter ...

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I'm anxious for the next series of this story.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Great story- would love to see it continue and agree keen for the truth, some romance and a happy ending!!

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