All Comments on 'Forevermore Ch. 01'

by macymadison

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dwoelfledwoelflealmost 3 years ago

Wow. Can't wait for more.

monicablumonicablualmost 3 years ago

Such a fantastically written combination of pain and eroticism, woven into a three-dimensional tale - a story within a story within a story. Truly deserving of 5-stars. ~M

DevilbobyDevilbobyalmost 3 years ago

I think this story is great it's got everything love lust doubt as Monica says it's a story within a story. But I hope Belinda doesn't get help in the morning, I want her to finish her contract first. I hate big business and the pressures they place on people let Belinda get out of their clutches and then allow her a holiday and all the rehab she can handle. Sorry if I feel like those big business people. I'm not, just a Randy old man with an eye for a good story. And this is a good story , just watch out for that swinging pendulum. 5 stars no less.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great creative writing. When the end came i wanted more

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Just fantastic and so loving… written by someone that has deeply loved another. Thank you for your story and your heart :)

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