All Comments on 'Forget Me Not'

Homophobia makes me go soft :(

Great job regardless of the fact NO woman young or old would ever say "Pummell my pussy"

Good one!

Lovely premise.

But sex moves too fast. Starts too fast. Happens too fast. Ends too fast.

What about the rest of her body? Would he like to see her tits (again?) ?

What do they look like? Big? Small? What are the nipples like? When she touches her nipples do they get hard and erect?

Do you like them? Why don't you show me how much you like them?

How about her ass?

Four stars.

Badly needed the backstory.

Hot story. I enjoyed how she woke him up while he was passed out on the couch. I hope you continue with this storyline.

Excellent. Short but very sexy. One of the best I've read in quite a while. Thank you.

Too unrealistic, so I gave it Two Stars...'cause I didn't like it too much!

A stroke story, but a pretty good stroke story.

THIS WAS SIMPLY TRASH....HE GETS A BJ AND FUCK FOR FORGETTING HER!!!!

THIS WAS A TOTALLY FUCKED UP STORY!!

DRUNK BROTHER FORGETS THE SLUT SISTER AND SHE GETS HOME TO GIVE A BJ THEN FUCK!!

PATHETIC STORY!!

TRASH!!

[10.11.22]

hawt, haWT, HAWT!

11/10!!!!!

What the fuck is even happening in this? You can't write a story without context, it doesn't work. Recommend rewriting with backstory or some kind of context.

Hot story, as sister reclaims her brother from the slut that had him, at the club, while he was drunk. That club-girl emptied her brother and his mind, sister is not going to let that happen again anytime soon...

Good, fraught with anxiety, jealousy, the angst of the taboo, and the related needs to take and to claim, and the needs of desire overcoming the wisdom of checking for safe sex...

Very hot

I gave you a five, but I probably should have given you a four. The story was pretty hot, but it leaves too much unsaid. Why is Jessica JEALOUS of some other girl blowing her brother? 🤔 Dean doesn't react surprised to find his sister sucking his dick. Neither does he protest when she claims his manhood as her property.

There is a LOT of background information missing about their relationship that brought them to screwing each other for the first time.