All Comments on 'Forgetting the Past Ch. 03'

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SadieRoseSadieRoseabout 16 years ago
HOT! HOT! HOT!

Fabulous! I'd give this a ten but I'm only allowed five votes! I have to say I was just beginning to wonder what had happened to nasty old Azrael (love the demonic name too, high drama indeed!) In spite of my pathological aversion to happy endings I've really enjoyed this story. A wonderful, sexy tale of love and jealousy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
more

u beter make another!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Just One Thing...

you made a teeny tiny mistake...

"Ares, psycho that he obviously is, ended up in prison. After Tyler had whacked him one and phoned the police..."

surely you mean Azrael?!

but otherwise great story xxxx

Xie_LeiXie_Leiover 15 years ago
Very fascinating.

This was a very nice story, although at one point I did think that Ares might end up with Azrael (before he met Tyler, that is). I hope to be able to read a story about Ares, though. I happen to like dark, twisted characters. Anyhow, good luck with your future writing.

Danae72Danae72almost 15 years ago
Fabulous

Love your stories very much. I hope that at some point you'll write more for our enjoyment!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Love it.

I got so engrossed in this the time just flew by. Don't know how I'm gonna get up tomorrow!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

i love your stories i hope you write more,]

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
One of my favorites!!

I found myself re-reading this story because it is just SO great. Easily 5 stars! I love your vivid descriptions and lovable (and sometimes hate-able -i know, thats not a word, but hey i'm a reader not a writer ;p) characters and find the ending just so sweet. =) I hope to read new stuff from you in the near future. Your fan, elle.

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66almost 13 years ago

This was a great story and why wasn't Az put in a psych ward?? Great story can't wait to see more

jtownmanjtownmanover 5 years ago
Good Story

This was a really good story. It had me captivated until the end :-)

BlowPopJBlowPopJover 3 years ago
Beautiful

No other words can describe this series.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

First class loves story with good plot twists.

The emotional content seems spot on, the writing is crisp and the characters believable.

Thank you for creating and sharing such an excellent story.

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