All Comments on 'Forgetting This Affair'

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MigbirdMigbirdabout 1 month ago

Premise enjoys a lot of potential. Liked the anonymity and reflections revealing his confusion/angst. And therein lies my complaint — the subtitle suggests their effort to deal with infidelity, but the piece was essentially his story. Maybe there will be a “her” POV.

lc69hunterlc69hunterabout 1 month ago

exploration of the angst, and the joy/hate of these things

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Very real. In my case I could not let the anger go so one day she had enough of my not caring about her and the sex was always "angry" sex. Revenge sex. I always wore a condom, I never did oral, I could not kiss her lips.

She knew we were done. You can't erase what happened. I could never forget. I could not forgive.

You captured that very well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Would never touch the cheating skank slut again for any reason, even to pull her from a burins building. MC is a pussy.

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