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by GiadaRosetta

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Paul4playPaul4playover 3 years ago
Excellent!

You have captured the tension and pace of her fear and pain.

And exposed her vulnerability....

Please keep writing.

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Thank you for taking a bit of your time if you have read something from what I have submitted here so far. I am poet mostly and still getting a feel for writing longer pieces. Things about me: Just someone trying to make my way in our tumultuous world. Most of my writings wil...