All Comments on 'Formless Apocalypse Ch. 01'

A great start and looking forward to seeing chapter two. I would have given it 5 stars, but for some reason voting not possible either on mobile or desktop at the moment. Also, you changed the subject designation from 5127 to 8127.

Ahh! I see that now. Thank you!

Thank you for the correction! Chapter 2 should be out in a couple of days!

Excellent beginning. Good pacing and with plenty of room left to let one's imagination fill in the horror. Well done.