All Comments on 'Forsaken Ch. 00'

The highest compliment I can give you is that I want to read more.

Well done.

~Masterskitten26

I really am intrigued. Please continue, and I hope the witch and the Alpha put aside everything to pursue a true mate bond.

I can't wait for more and hope that it's soon!

It's a good start and I', hoping to read more.

Just make sure the aunts motive is a strong one. A bad or weak villian can hurt a story as they often push it along/give reason to care

Im interested where this is going. Also please finish your previous tale!

im gutted there isnt more! such a good start setting up something i thought id really get stuck into, do you have any plans to continue??

~R

a promising start!

I can understand why theres one

Not sure the werewolfs are supposed to be Norwegian or just living in Norway? But Älskling is Swedish :)