All Comments on 'Fortune and Fortitude Pt. 06'

Good, except for the rather large screw up:

"He cupped her face with his hand as he pulled away,

He cupped her face with his hand as he pulled away. She moved after him slightly, reluctant to end so soon. Her brown eyes gazed at him softly, with a tenderness and a slight question to it."

That and Zoe having a new 'whole' in her belt, instead of the proper hole it should have been.

Yes make Miss Senguine part of the harem. There’s a lot you could do there including her becoming softer and him becoming more masculine. Increase his powers greatly for it. Make Kiara more of the lead instead of Quinn. He’s way too soft and submissive right now. For such a power make him more dominant, strong, protective. I like the possible warlock arc as a stage to getting stronger. Love your writing thank you :)

Great story with unlimited future potential, keep going, i caught the first one and read them all the way through.

Yes I would definitely add at leas Miss Senguine! Ideally both get added to the harem. I’d love to see Nasha but she’s secondary to Jessica Senguine.

That it could do without the mentions of rape and prostitution but good chapter overall

Yes, jessica should definetly join, but end up being a submissive in the bedroom.

Zoe should help him figure out how to unblock annikas ability to feed efficiently empowering her.

The wraith sex with kiara while he simultaneously makes love to ria should allow him to feed kiara in desperate straits.

Not a bad chapter, I liked the more confidence he had.. keep it up.. I don't know about adding Jess/mom to the fold.. it seems to cliche..

Amazing story. Definitely would love to see miss sanguine be apart of his harem not sure about Nasha tho. Any way keep up the excellent work can't wait till the next installment

I think since Annika can feed in multiple ways maybe she can get feminine sexual energy as well. So a threesome would be great for her cuz she can get to sources of essence at once

Should Miss Senguine be part of the harem?…….yes , she’s hot

What about Nasha?……yes why not

What threesome would you like to see next?….your call ,…but definitely yes or maybe even a foursome

Give me a plot twist that I can use,….. The Wizard tries to abduct one of his girls and he goes to war and wipes out the family of wizards, freeing one of the daughters of the Wizard family that was exceptionally unhappy and being a white knight…… Or some BS like that but definitely a war with the wizards. LOL thank you very much for the chapter greatly appreciated really enjoying the story

Yes ... Would like to have both Senguine and Nasha ...btw ..keep up the good work...

This is a good story. Miss Senguine should be in the harem, for a big family threesome!

Jared mother dosn't feed because she has been purifing her self for jared since she was forced to give him up. That way she can imprint on him! Meaning she will only need him to provide her with sustance.

Jared did promise to help Miss S with her feeding and give her a reason to live. She is a needed as the brains of the harem. Also fits perfectly in the story arch with getting to know his vassals. When Jared closes the deal with Annika she should get a great boast

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I am curious to know what powers Jared is going to develop next. As far as a Threesome… I think it should be a family affair with Jessica as a submissive along with Quinn. I can’t wait to see the next installment. Keep up the good work. I look every day to see if you have written a new chapter for F&F and the other stories you have posted. Thanks

Absolutely miss senguine should be included!

Add then all and mother and daughter threesome

Love the Story,

Greetings from Germany

I am quite enjoying how the tale is moving. Interested in how the last paragraph plays going forward. Overall, I'm enjoying this story immensely.

I’m enjoying slowly learning about the elements and magic of this world along with Jared. I hope he continues to get over his angst about having relations with multiple girls, given the realities of his situation. I hope that he helps feed the poor girl (demon) who needs feeding next, along with Quinn as a tasty side dish. ;-)

We are waiting since a long time, try to post another chapter please

Should X be part of the harem? Yes. Next threescore? Quinn and Zoe after he adds Anika to the harem.

Twists? Sorcerer guy is an illusionist and is actually a woman and joins the harem. Yay harem.

Loving the story. Well written with enough plot to keep the story flowing, and just the right amount of sex thrown in to keep it spicy.

As for threesome, you have to get Nash and Quinn together obviously.

Their mother involved? Yes, even if it is just to get her fed again and back in the game.

Plot twist. Several suggestions. One Nash joins but is a plant, as her mother is actually his father's vassal. Or she could be member of another one of the council's underlings.

Two Jessica is still his father's vassal and everything is a plot to get Jared stronger until his father can come to feed on his essence. (After all, he would know how kill him)

Three Jared actually finds out demons can possess a soul.

I enjoyed the story and I'm looking forward to reading more. How about introducing a new lover who ultimately betrays Jared putting him into a dangerous, life threatening situation. Perhaps he learns a little bit about flying as he drops from a high distance...

Are you still writing this story? I hope so!

Definitely yes to mom joining the harem, she needs love too (and sustenance to live) obviously. Yes to Nasha.

I still don't like Jared. His morals are very selective and misguided if seems. He's worried about offending his cuckquean wife by having sex with another women more than his fiance starving to death. He's an asshole. He should've fucked both Annika and Ria by now and mom shortly thereafter.

Quinn, Ria sister cousin threesome. Quinn, mom happy family threesome. Ria, mom threesome. ;)

Quinn, Zoe reconciliation threesome. Quinn, Nasha best friends threesome. Endless threesome possibilities lol.

2 sex scenes per part would be better imo, you can chop out some filler and keep same # of words if you want. :)

Please add more!!!

27 comments. So We are waiting. Will keep you on my favorites.

Hey...long overdue for another chapter right?? Please give us another chapter...we are eagerly awaiting both this and the law of glork...

Stumbled upon this , kept me enthralled on a rainy Sunday afternoon . More please .

1. Nasha definitely needs to be brought into the harem. Is she perhaps a houri? I think she mentioned a maternal figure for her house, too. Sounds like she could bring a whole new bevy of beauties to the harem. Bring Nasha in... then her mommy want's in on the action. Nasha's mommy activates Senguine's territoriality and she finds herself wanting a piece of the action.

2. Senguine definitely needs to be brought in. Perhaps she needs a bit of force. Maybe another vassal has some ability to sense needs/desires... and mommy does want some sustenance after all, she's just reluctant to admit it.

3. He needs to build a power structure and a lair, perhaps he needs to go on the hunt for some businesswoman or realtor. Maybe find a way to get his claws in a jewelry business?

4. Maybe that sorcerer prick has a sister who's tired of his shit and would rather be affiliated with a caring dragon?

5. If Quinn has a cuckquean fetish, maybe she's been fantasizing about other classmates of theirs in his arms and in his bed... does Zoe have a sister, cousin, or neighbor who'd love to belong to a strong, handsome, caring man?

Still waiting and hoping for an update

Enjoying the story Thank for your time and effort writing

I have really been enjoying this story, I sure do hope that it will get finished.

👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

Definitely bring in Nasha and Senguine.

Also... Ashley, as a submissive pet of Quinn's?

Sanguine- definitely. Nasha and her mother!

Add all the female demons in his orbit to the harem. He needs the power.

Please add Senguine, and Ashley. Nasha seems annoying person same as Quinn, the best thing about Quinn is that she has high sex drive. keep th good work.