All Comments on 'Fortune Favors the Bold'

Why is this in the Mature section? Are we to assume that the two protagonists are over the age of 18 and that makes them mature? This is a bit of Erotic Couplings and has all the suspense of a glass of water. Don't waste our time! 2*

I'm sorry, it's just not very good. And it's in the wrong section.

I liked it.

Sure, there's more and this could be fleshed out a bit, but the savage rawness is interesting.