All Comments on 'Fortune Favours the Bold'

by MrMolo

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Seen some videos of this scenario. Very hot to see it written out. Great job and five stars.

Dewey Cheatham

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Go back and look closely at where you chose to use commas. It's far from correct and makes this, as short as it is, surprisingly difficult to read without going back and trying to parse some of the sentences correctly.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Author seems to be unaware of the purpose of a '?' as well.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Nicely narrated and supremely on point.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago
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i don't give a fuck about tits if there is a pussy in the room!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Just average not really incest just a BJ and it was too short 3 stars

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