All Comments on 'Fortune Wood'

by Lucreace

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PennLadyPennLadyover 13 years ago
Nice start?

Seems like this is the start of something, and I hope you continue it. I'm curious about the nightwalkers and how they interact with the others.

Zodia195Zodia195over 13 years ago
Love it

I do hope you continue with this story. It is very fascinating. I am curious to see if our heroine really is a human or not.

canndcanndover 13 years ago

I hope this is a first chapter. I like the story and would love to see their relationship continue to develop. i like that you didn't make it the typical he falls and makes her his mate right away. I'd like to see them slowly get to that point with some conflict inside them in terms of how they feel about it...maybe one of the women could explain to her more about them and more about mates in their world? I hope to see more of the story.

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 11 years ago
Fantastic first chapter.

I like them both and the idea that Leif seems oblivious to the fact that she is his mate. I'm glad I'm behind a chapter, so I don't have to wait for more!

Thanks for writing!

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 11 years ago
Oh, but just seeing this is old...

hope it is finished!

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