All Comments on 'Forty-Five Minutes away'

Damn, that was unbelievably hot. I'm hoping you give us another chapter but please don't include Colon in the sex, I think it would detract from the story.

Seems like little bro Colin has already visited the honey pot. Hopefully, James can keep his new stake on mom.

Wow and its only your first submition. Hot and dirty, I love it, 5 stars indeed

Wonderful story, very hot. Good job on your first submission. My only complaint is that there were too many breaks in the dialogues with those ellipses (...), it was too distracting and unnecessary for much of the dialogue. Other than that, this was a great story and I can't wait to read what you have next.

Great first story, you have a good writing talent. It felt realistic and I really felt for these characters. I have to agree with previous comment about the breaks in the dialogue, you should cut back on that next time.

Very good story, Mom and son need to carry on at least one more chapter and get that pic erased off Colin’s phone befor son and dad return.

FTDS

More please

Next chapter

Great story, would love a continuation, maybe she visits ? Maybe he comes home and they have the house to themselves?

Looking forward to more of your work.