by Sailor1
Your talent never ceases to amaze me. Another winner. I hope that this turns into another series of stories!
If I were the editor this story would have not only H, but E, W and any other letter you wish for!
So sweet!
John
As an old retired Navy Chief I got the stirring of some almost forgotten memories, Hawaii had it fun & type of intrigue but quite a few of the locals hated us. Riding a motorcycle could sometimes be looked at as a suicide or possible life altering event, giving a local gal a ride somewhere could get you killed unless you were "known".
As in this story, many families weren't happy if their girls hooked up with the mainland fellas.
Great writing, keep 'em coming!! BRAVO!
Well written. I loved the pacing. It made me feel like I was on a leisurely vacation in Hawaii as I was reading it.