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Paniolo BoyPaniolo Boyabout 18 years ago
Another winner...

Your talent never ceases to amaze me. Another winner. I hope that this turns into another series of stories!

NamizujsNamizujsabout 18 years ago
Wonderful!

If I were the editor this story would have not only H, but E, W and any other letter you wish for!

So sweet!

John

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Excellent Writing & Story Line

As an old retired Navy Chief I got the stirring of some almost forgotten memories, Hawaii had it fun & type of intrigue but quite a few of the locals hated us. Riding a motorcycle could sometimes be looked at as a suicide or possible life altering event, giving a local gal a ride somewhere could get you killed unless you were "known".

As in this story, many families weren't happy if their girls hooked up with the mainland fellas.

Great writing, keep 'em coming!! BRAVO!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Well written. I loved the pacing. It made me feel like I was on a leisurely vacation in Hawaii as I was reading it.

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