All Comments on 'Found - Again'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Spelling killed it

Get help please. Story was good but mistakes killed the fun

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
This fucking line.....

This fucking line from the story had me rolling with laughter..haha

" A wave of pleasure starting at my feet, it built up and shit through me like a rocket."

I'm trying really hard to visualize it, but can't🐾

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Proof reader

You definitely need a proof reader to help you with all the spelling errors. Hard to read, but overall not a bad story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
If you cant afford a spellchecker, openoffice is free.

I couldn't even finish reading this story.

An excessive number of mistakes in spelling and grammar ruins any possible entertainment value.

cdCindy1cdCindy1about 3 years ago

Fantastic story !!! I would love for this to happen to me. I wish I could dress as sexy as you and do my make-up and nails like you did. The only thing I wouldn't do is have a cock-cage -- I am a sissy faggot slut but I won't be locked. My Master and Mistress will fuck me deep and I will cum all over and eat it up for them.

please continue. This story is fantastic!!!

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