All Comments on 'Found Ch. 03'

I was so pleased to see that another chapter had been posted! I hope you don't keep us waiting for long on the rest of this amazing story! Thanks!

i absolutely love this series and hope u will post another quickly...pls proofread before u turn in your story, it's not unbearable but it would make the story go a lot smoother...other than that, great job

So far I love this series.... Keep writing!

Im glad you all are liking the series. So far I have up to chapter 10. I plan to submit atleast once a week. Also I uploaded the wrong file, this is the unedited version as you can tell with the misspelled words. I will try to fix that and will have Chapter 4 submitted by Saturday!

How in the world have I missed this!?! This is just great, and don't worry about the wrong file, it happens *grin* Can't wait for the next posting...

THE STORY IS GOOD. THE PLOT NEEDS SOME WORK. AND BOY YOU REALLY NEED A PROOF READER AND EDITOR. BAD ! BUT ALL IN ALL A GOOD BEGINNING OF A NEW WORLD TO GET ABSORBED IN. FOR AFTER ALL A BOOK, STORY, SONG, POEM, OR RHYME IS A WORLD OF THE WRITERS OWN CREATION. AND YOU HAVE CREATED ONE THAT MAKES ME WANT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. GOOD JOB !

The same plot was just reiterated over and over. You don't need to detail the entire conversation when they're telling each other what's happened, since your audience already knows what's going on.

I m thoroughly enjoying this pack. I like the difference in the Alpha too. Actually, this is more what I would expect in wolves.

I wish you would just get to the point already, we don't need to rehash every single detail again and again.