by Gumbo25
I don't think it is possible for JD to whine any more than he did. I had to skip some pages b/c it was so pathetic.
The ending was pretty good. JD was a bit whiney. He's also more oblivious than the husbands in the Oblivious Cuckold stories. You know, the husband that sees the bull and his wife sitting on the edge of his pool and she has cum on her face and says it's just lotion. Then the bull tells him he should use the lotion to avoid a sunburn and he rubs it all in his own face. It's almost kind of unreal how he was able to formulate such a plan in the end, as much of an idiot as he was throughout the rest of the story.
I almost quit reading when JD kept going back to see Melanie. Such a jerk. The ending, however, was pretty good.