All Comments on 'Ellen Journals 02. Aphrodite's Fountain'

Very erotic, very visual and most importantly very believable. Some stories are good, but so unbelievable it is distracting. Thank you

Quite realistic. good graphic descriptions. Some blokes would love this to happen but probably wouldn't know how to handle it. Appreciated the "non-swap" aspect.

Looking forward to next edition.

Very hot story. I'm still hard as a rock. Looking forward to next contribution.

for the most part this is a very good story. A few parts get a bit confusing such as "Ellen absently rubbed her pussy and moaned. “Oooooooooooo! I still want more fucking,” she pouted. She stood up and walked over to our sofa. She squatted a bit and rubbed her pussy, looking at Ellen, then me, and asked “Did you like watching me?”" is it ann talking or ellen? but otherwise it was very arousing and engaging.

You are the master of sexually romantic writing!