All Comments on 'Four Minutes Thirty Seconds'

If anyone cares. I wrote some responses to questions and critiques on the message boards. I did not get all, just a few that either stuck out or were brought up more than once.

Pretty good. A little more fantasy than loving wives or other category. But still well done.

Better than most. I enjoyed it.

Pretty hard to come up with an original take on "February Sucks". You did it and deserve 5 stars.

Bloody clever to come up with a new twist. Kudos.

Damn I like it.

Nice variation.

2nd read, and I still agree with 5 stars for what I think is one of the most original additions to the "February Sucks" canon...

Finally, the bastard is dead. If ever there was a character that needed a nasty ending it was Marc. Thank you.

We all need to support men ( or women ) who have been screwed over. Doesn’t eBen have to be this blatant.

Very good ending to the February Sucks series. The one thing that always niggled me about the other versions, is how Mark continued to pull this off, time after time. You would have thought after one or two, someone would have at least outed him to the news. And with all the AR-15’s arming had crazies, someone would have shot him. In any case, great version- 5 stars.

Good story, Better than mine 5*****

Great version! Even better than the one that I wrote myself! 5 big blazing stars to writer, great writing! Great story! Great effort! Thanks Buster2U

George Anderson now becomes a laughing stock. His story is haunting him where everybody are writing him to do FS versions.

He shot him in the penis three times and the balls four times? Did he have a pellet gun? The author is either taking the piss or has no idea how much damage a single 9mm or .40 round would do. Just plain stupid.

5 star. Marc finally got what he deserved.

GREAT alternate!!!!! CONGRATS!!!

What a nice supprise - a great 're-think' of this story.

5*

The last lie was a good twist..

You get 5 stars for shooting Marcs' dock off.

Finally there's justice! 5 stars!

G

había olvidado este.... 5 estrellas nuevamente.

Real good. Love the twists and turns.

Solid. Powerful. Five extra-large stars.

Well told story. What are the odds that out if 591 wives who Marc cuckold, that zero get payback until this guy? Would be surprised given the in your face humiliation that is went beyond 25 or so before some irreparable harm was done to Marc.

"your ex-wife is surely the laughing stock of her neighborhood." - you really needed to explain this. Marc wasn't the only one that needed some payback.....

Liked this one. Good job at viewing it from a different angle.

Another good take on that great story by George.

Unusual for a FS sequel, I awarded five stars.

JPB

In an older comment I questioned why a friend's car, it wasn't like they would recognize his, only now realized that he probably didn't have a car, duh!

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I've read this before, but somehow I totally forgot the ending.

Best Feb story ever. Thanks.

Real nice touch with the prosecutor at the end. 5 star story for me!

Outstanding. What a nice fresh take on a great story.

Good ending to this story. 5 stars.

That's a great version

Again, still the very best ending to the story.

Nicely written. Very good ending. TFS

Bravo! 5 stars! Now that's what BTB is all about!

Great finish. Have read most of the other versions and this is one of the best.

@sbrooks103x

In an older comment I questioned why a friend's car, it wasn't like they would recognize his, only now realized that he probably didn't have a car, duh! - That pretty much confirms what I thought. You just spout off the first thing that comes to mind rather than think before you speak.

One of the better followups. Well done!

Wow!

Surprising twisted ending to this version.

Very creative.

+1 for last line

Nice one.

Primal - well maybe.

The only problem with this is that 99% of the "GOOD" wives would actually NOT do it.

That is why FS has 200 sequels - it's almost fantastical.

And believe me - I hate most women with passion.

Nice. But I still don't buy most women would do that. Humans aren't wolves....

Good twist in the original though

good alternate view

@AllNighter

I agree. But the premise of the original was that George Anderson wrote the story because of a conversation a bunch of people both men and women had had. The women had all said that if a 'Jocko' (generic famous athlete) had come on to them they'd have gone off with him. If that conversation is considered typical, then a majority of wives would cheat on their husbands if they were hit on by a famous athlete, and at least some would leave with him even if their husbands were there.

Mr. Anderson then extrapolates this to have it happen in the most humiliating way possible.

Even though I'm a man and supposedly think with my little head, if the 2023 equivalent of Julia Roberts came on to me, I might be tempted, but I believe I'd stay faithful. If the 2023 equivalent of Julia Roberts came on to me in the situation of 'February Sucks' there's no way I'd even consider leaving with her.

I don't believe that women are worse than men in that regard.

Excellent!

Could have used a bit more detail about ex-wife and kids.

Nicely done. Only one question? So little mass wouldn’t bouncing slugs be a problem???

LOVE slap-hapy-papy #9

Great and original spin on the FS story. Hopeful in that you can see the start of John getting his life back, thanks to his brothers in arms. Did the DA’s wife get seduced by Marc before or after John’s trial?

@FaceForRadio, you DO realize that John shot Marc's cock and balls pretty much off, right? So it had to be after John's trial. And he was just the prosecuting attorney, not the District Attorney.

5 stars - Finally someone really gets it - this is how it should have ended.

5 stars from Xluckylee

Poor dialogue. Bad story-telling.

Love it. Just sad that always someone has to take a fall to bring an asshole down.

One of the best

Yes! Finally a husband takes action and stops the Asshole. A little late for him but in the nick of time for others.

Probably the best rewrite I have read. Keep writing.

#104 FS sequel read and this one is absolutely great. 5* all day.

5 Stars!!!

*****

Enjoyed your version. Just one thing, bullets go dead upon striking some thing.

LOVE slap-hapy-papy #9

Second read and still 5 stars from Xluckylee

This was absolutely my favorite Feb Sucks story....by far!!!!

Reread. I agree with myself 11 months ago. Five stars for an unusual version.

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JPB NOT BOB

What a cleaver idea. I loved it, especially the ending. Five stars -- more if I could.

Oh yeah! Finally the wife stealer got his proper reward. 5*