by wetwordmixer
That story was the most amazing erotic story I have ever read keep up the good work I look forward to four nights part 2 through 100
I know that the story is called "Four Nights", but the progression from repressed sexuality to a foursome seems a bit rapid. The story is hot, but it would be even hotter if the progression was more plausible. It's the plausibility coupled with hot sex scenes that really strikes at the core of the libido. It makes one imagine that "yeah, this might happen to me someday." LOL!
I still gave it a 4, but would've liked to give it a 4.5.
Tela just became an easy slut! Enjoyed it more when she was a bit reluctant and her lust made her do things she felt guilty about later. All too soon you just had an easy whore who,would do anything with anyone... big deal!
You have probably thought of this, but could Azure ask Tela to dance at the club, perhaps on amateur night or on an audition basis?
This is a great story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. The plot and the descriptions are very erotic and kept me totally aroused and eager for more.