All Comments on 'Four Rough Men Educate Sweatermeat'

Further to my comments on the first part...

I think the S&M is getting a little more than I'm comfortable with, but I'm sure others will enjoy it.

On the plus side (For me) there are some interesting elements (Measurements - although they seems a little contradictory to part one, Sweatermeat's exhibitionism & enthusiasm, the prospect of the general manhandling, deepthroat & titfucking), and I like your direct and enthusiastic style of writing.

Good luck with other parts. I'll probably look in again sometime to see what's happening.