All Comments on 'Four Scarves Ch. 03'

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SweetLittleLiarSweetLittleLiarabout 17 years ago
Another delicious chapter

The suspense is definitely building as Amanda is learning to push her own boundaries. I find I am as excited by her enjoyment of the "assignments" she is asked to complete as I am by the anticipation of what she will be asked to do next. Striding out of that dressing room and into the store, surrounded by customers and staff, was quite an accomplishment! I can't wait to see how far her Secret Admirer will have her go before he reveals himself to her ... or perhaps that's not the way it will happen after all. Another excellent piece of work, Mr. Peterson!

docBluedocBluealmost 17 years ago
another step

Having Amanda displayed at the store was a great scene. Not only because I would have loved to have been there, but because she did it in steps ... first the top, then fully, then in front of an audience. Nice buildup once again... great series so far!

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